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When a world famous actor moves in next door, a small town girl tries to teach him how to have a normal life
The two things I think need a look. ?I am guessing he has moved to a small town? Because it could be a major city with a girl from a small town living next door. ?If he has moved to a small town then why? ?This could give you so much implied story beyond just an inciting incident, "post rehab", "visRead more
The two things I think need a look. ?I am guessing he has moved to a small town? Because it could be a major city with a girl from a small town living next door. ?If he has moved to a small town then why? ?This could give you so much implied story beyond just an inciting incident, “post rehab”, “visiting a dying relative” etc.
What is their eventual relationship? I think this would set tone. Here is my take on Titanic as an example.
A young socialite desperate to escape her controlling fiance fails in love with a penniless artist on board Titanic.
i hope this helps. ?I can see this as a good story.
See less?When a teenager is accidentally transferred to a school for criminals, he will have to learn all the tricks of the trade and survive the competition in order to win the honor of being the city?s next don.?
I can see what the story is. ?But I have a question. ?Does he want to be the Don? ?Is it thrust upon him? What is the competition, it sounds like an event? ?I may approach it like this. A teenager is wrongly transferred to a school for criminals. ?Desperate to just survive, he develops skills and aRead more
I can see what the story is. ?But I have a question. ?Does he want to be the Don? ?Is it thrust upon him? What is the competition, it sounds like an event? ?I may approach it like this.
A teenager is wrongly transferred to a school for criminals. ?Desperate to just survive, he develops skills and a network that will see him become the next Don.
See lessThe most legendary and recognizable singing slave in al-Andalus hires an adventuring Norman to steal the Caliph’s prize possession, herself.
I am left wondering 'Why'. ?What is the slave wanting to achieve? Sounds like an interesting start, but I am unsure of what the story is.
I am left wondering ‘Why’. ?What is the slave wanting to achieve?
Sounds like an interesting start, but I am unsure of what the story is.
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