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  1. Posted: December 3, 2015In: Comedy

    After drunkenly trashing his dealer’s car, a 25 year old slacker has to secretly use the only job he has, a shared paper route with his overachieving 14 year old sister to distribute weed until it gets fixed.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 13, 2015 at 9:26 am

    A slacker, not sure it is the right word or paints enough of a picture. ?The sibling rivalry may be great, but is it the aim of the script? If so start with that, "sibling rivalry boils over when..." ?I like the idea of a loser do a paper to sell drugs. "Desperate for money to fix his dealers car aRead more

    A slacker, not sure it is the right word or paints enough of a picture. ?The sibling rivalry may be great, but is it the aim of the script? If so start with that, “sibling rivalry boils over when…” ?I like the idea of a loser do a paper to sell drugs.

    “Desperate for money to fix his dealers car a stoner shares his ( over achiever) sisters paper route as a ruse to sell weed.”

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  2. Posted: December 9, 2015In: Drama

    A hitman finds himself sharing a booth in a small town diner with the mobster who hired him and his proposed victim. The killer takes a liking to his target and turns down the job, which doesn?t sit well with his employer. That?s when the guns come out and he has to do some fast talking before things turn deadly.

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    Added an answer on December 12, 2015 at 10:42 pm

    This would make a good short film. Single scene done. But if you are thinking feature, focus on his main goal after the twist. ?Then what is stopping him from reaching that goal. "A hitman decides to save rather than kill his victim which makes them both targets of his boss".

    This would make a good short film. Single scene done.

    But if you are thinking feature, focus on his main goal after the twist. ?Then what is stopping him from reaching that goal.

    “A hitman decides to save rather than kill his victim which makes them both targets of his boss”.

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  3. Posted: August 31, 2015In: Public

    A single desperate fathers journey to save his daughter from a rare disease, he embarks on the seemingly impossible journey inside of area 51 where the only known antidote is, with bad luck finding him along the way and time not on his side, his daughter begins to fade fast.

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    Added an answer on December 12, 2015 at 10:37 pm

    A father must sneak inside Area 51 to steal the only antidote to save his dying daughter. You can add and subtract as you like. But the shorter the better, straight to the heart of the story.

    A father must sneak inside Area 51 to steal the only antidote to save his dying daughter.

    You can add and subtract as you like. But the shorter the better, straight to the heart of the story.

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