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An impoverished teen drug mule threaten to inform by Police must find a way to get out of the business and save her sister being held as collateral.
The cops see her as a weak link and are threatening her, "someone is doing time, you or the boss..." type threats. hand on forehead moment with the structure. ?Starting with the sister works much better, thanks. ? I am writing it for a small group of actors I have access to. ?If I can scam the locatRead more
The cops see her as a weak link and are threatening her, “someone is doing time, you or the boss…” type threats.
hand on forehead moment with the structure. ?Starting with the sister works much better, thanks. ? I am writing it for a small group of actors I have access to. ?If I can scam the locations this logline will help form my funding pitch.
keep it coming if you see more. I’ll redraft and post it as a comment. Thanks again.
See lessWhen a gang of street kids are trapped in an abandoned high-rise by armed vigilantes, a homeless veteran must overcome his trauma or let the children die.
I have to agree. ?Your logline sets up a good scene but gives no motivation. ?Just a hint is needed for tone. ?Plus I think everyone knows PTSD these days, so you could cal it that.
I have to agree. ?Your logline sets up a good scene but gives no motivation. ?Just a hint is needed for tone. ?Plus I think everyone knows PTSD these days, so you could cal it that.
See lessAfter a supernatural creature slaughtered his family and a handful of other people 15 years ago at his Nevadan hometown, Roland Fisher, sets off once again to find the truth when the same incident occurs yet again, leaving one boy survivor in the creature?s trail of murder.
I find it a little unclear. "a man goes in search of a young boy who is the sole survivor of a slaughter by the same supernatural creatures that killed his own family fifteen years earlier" This version just looks at the events. ?You can add in any colour you want. ?The one thing I also think is misRead more
I find it a little unclear.
“a man goes in search of a young boy who is the sole survivor of a slaughter by the same supernatural creatures that killed his own family fifteen years earlier”
This version just looks at the events. ?You can add in any colour you want. ?The one thing I also think is missing is why. ?Why is he going to find the boy, is the need for the truth compelling enough? ?How much more truth is there to be found? ?He knows his family was killed by supernatural creatures.
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