1. Posted: June 14, 2019In:

    In a dystopian right wing world. A terrorist group is planting boxes holding either cash or explosives, opening it makes you rich or dead. A poor man and his friend find one and try to figure out what to do.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I have the theme/question ?It is better to die on your feet than live on your knees? The man doesn?t believe this in the beginning. But after having the opportunity for wealth tease him. He begins to see his life for what it is comprise and suffering. Here is the logline: When a poor yet content manRead more

    I have the theme/question

    ?It is better to die on your feet than live on your knees?

    The man doesn?t believe this in the beginning. But after having the opportunity for wealth tease him. He begins to see his life for what it is comprise and suffering. Here is the logline:

    When a poor yet content man finds a box that may contain money or a bomb left by a terrorists, and after failed attempts to discover its contents he finally deciding it is better to die than live on your knees.

    Thanks for any feedback. For tone think ?Children of Men?.

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2019In:

    In a dystopian right wing world. A terrorist group is planting boxes holding either cash or explosives, opening it makes you rich or dead. A poor man and his friend find one and try to figure out what to do.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    That?s if getting rich was his ambition. That would indicate he had already made up his mind. I need a question. With a question I can explore various answers. Thanks you the suggestion.

    That?s if getting rich was his ambition. That would indicate he had already made up his mind. I need a question. With a question I can explore various answers.

    Thanks you the suggestion.

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  3. Posted: June 14, 2019In:

    In a dystopian right wing world. A terrorist group is planting boxes holding either cash or explosives, opening it makes you rich or dead. A poor man and his friend find one and try to figure out what to do.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I am still struggling with the theme. I have the story and even the mood and tone in my head. But the theme, is escaping me. The central dramatic question. Something like ?would you kill for love?? I write around theme and question. ?I can?t find it in this story. ?I would appreciate if you would teRead more

    I am still struggling with the theme. I have the story and even the mood and tone in my head. But the theme, is escaping me. The central dramatic question. Something like ?would you kill for love??

    I write around theme and question. ?I can?t find it in this story. ?I would appreciate if you would tell me the questions this logline poses for you (theme questions).

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