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  1. Posted: August 22, 2019In: Drama

    A Google assistant narrates the story of a dysfunctional family going through a messy divorce after the father?committed infidelity.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 22, 2019 at 6:52 pm

    This is a nice way of telling a story. It is perhaps even a pitch. But what is the story? Traditionally there is something to achieve and the things in the way. ?You have describe a nice hook for a film, not a story. What makes it messy? That is the story.

    This is a nice way of telling a story. It is perhaps even a pitch. But what is the story?

    Traditionally there is something to achieve and the things in the way. ?You have describe a nice hook for a film, not a story.

    What makes it messy? That is the story.

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  2. Posted: August 21, 2019In: Drama

    When one of the last historical music venues closes, in a diversely changing city, a young band must help bring the spirit of Go-Go music to the forefront.

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    Added an answer on August 22, 2019 at 6:44 pm

    I think you have buried the story a bit, and why must they? Hoping to save GoGo music and their livelihoods a young band must .... in a hope of bring back the musics popularity in an increasingly gentrified city.

    I think you have buried the story a bit, and why must they?

    Hoping to save GoGo music and their livelihoods a young band must …. in a hope of bring back the musics popularity in an increasingly gentrified city.

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  3. Posted: June 28, 2019In: Adventure

    When his son is taken by a monster into another dimension, a withdrawn divorcee must venture through the portal to bring him back.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 29, 2019 at 8:51 pm

    To extend the Finding Nemo ?concept. Marlin was desperate to protect his only remaining child. I kept Nemo virtually caged to keep him safe. But this didn?t help, he was still taken. You also have a meaningless detail. He is a divorced. We don?t need that. ?We don?t get Amy free information from thaRead more

    To extend the Finding Nemo ?concept. Marlin was desperate to protect his only remaining child. I kept Nemo virtually caged to keep him safe. But this didn?t help, he was still taken.

    You also have a meaningless detail. He is a divorced. We don?t need that. ?We don?t get Amy free information from that.

    ?A man enters an alternate dimension to rescue his son from a monster that… but…. forcing him to ….?

    Hope that helps.

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