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A na?ve teenager takes a job as an interstellar mailman, to move to a paradise planet. On the job, he gets chased by foreign agents and assassins and discovers his paradise isn’t as good as it sounds
So his want is to be a resident of the planet. I feel you are burying the story in cool stuff. His job job as a mailman and rite to stay on paradise planet is threatened when a delivery goes wrong and he is chased by assassins and foreign agents who all believe him involved.
So his want is to be a resident of the planet. I feel you are burying the story in cool stuff.
His job job as a mailman and rite to stay on paradise planet is threatened when a delivery goes wrong and he is chased by assassins and foreign agents who all believe him involved.
See lessIn 24 hours she is forced into increasingly degrading and dangerous situations to save her loser boyfriend from a situation of his making only to realise she is better off with a broken heart than with a loser she loves.
@dpg I know I am in the minority. But I want people to question how I will tell the story not what the story is. ?If in a contest situation or when a producer is on a search and they are reading a few hundred loglines. I believe that an incomplete story will be looked over, maybe not intentionally,Read more
dpg I know I am in the minority. But I want people to question how I will tell the story not what the story is. ?If in a contest situation or when a producer is on a search and they are reading a few hundred loglines. I believe that an incomplete story will be looked over, maybe not intentionally, but it will not engage as much as a fully formed story. ?Like I said, just my opinion. Only here are loglines read in isolation.
Richiev, I know it would drag in the reader. But I don?t know what he has done yet. That may make her more panicked at some point. The story is that she is sees that her life will be better leaving him, but she continues. ?Around the midpoint she becomes aware that her faith in him is unjustified. So she start trying to get out of the situation she is in. ?At the final minutes she thinks he may have redeemed himself, but he hasn?t. He is still willing to disappoint her. ?The question the story answers is ?are you better to have a broken heart and live alone than be in a bad relationship?.
See less1950, blackmail and threats of outing a closeted gay detective when he is tasked with ?investigating the murder of his lover that appear to have been committed during a gay encounter.
Hi Rich, That is more concise. The part I am having a hard time integrating is the murder blackmailing him. He wants to get justice for his lover, he wants to protect the secret of his own sexuality (not sure if it was a crime in the 50?s - yep, I shuddered typing that). The murderer is trying to stRead more
Hi Rich,
That is more concise. The part I am having a hard time integrating is the murder blackmailing him. He wants to get justice for his lover, he wants to protect the secret of his own sexuality (not sure if it was a crime in the 50?s – yep, I shuddered typing that). The murderer is trying to steer the investigation by blackmailing him.
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