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Spending months planning his wife's murder to make it look like suicide. A man comes home to find his wife has killed herself. He now has to prove he didn't do it.
Hi Nir, Why would someone go on the run after find their spouse had committed suicide? I see what you are saying, but dropping the setup I think leaves more questions and removes what makes the story compelling. There is no need to prove his innocents unless facts point to him, like a half completedRead more
Hi Nir,
Why would someone go on the run after find their spouse had committed suicide? I see what you are saying, but dropping the setup I think leaves more questions and removes what makes the story compelling. There is no need to prove his innocents unless facts point to him, like a half completed murder plot.
Her death would be the twist that I would spin into the second act. As with many logline it stay virtually in the first act and hints and the path and resolution.
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Hi Nir, Why would someone go on the run after find their spouse had committed suicide? I see what you are saying, but dropping the setup I think leaves more questions and removes what makes the story compelling. There is no need to prove his innocents unless facts point to him, like a half completedRead more
Hi Nir,
Why would someone go on the run after find their spouse had committed suicide? I see what you are saying, but dropping the setup I think leaves more questions and removes what makes the story compelling. There is no need to prove his innocents unless facts point to him, like a half completed murder plot.
Her death would be the twist that I would spin into the second act. As with many logline it stay virtually in the first act and hints and the path and resolution.
See lessSpending months planning his wife's murder to make it look like suicide. A man comes home to find his wife has killed herself. He now has to prove he didn't do it.
I was using the Who, What they want and what is stopping them Man, Wants to get away with killing his wife, Wife's suicide is preventing this. I am excited by the idea that he will have to confess to conspiracy to commit murder to prove he didn't do the murder. Don't have the characters set out in mRead more
I was using the
Who, What they want and what is stopping them
Man, Wants to get away with killing his wife, Wife’s suicide is preventing this.
I am excited by the idea that he will have to confess to conspiracy to commit murder to prove he didn’t do the murder.
Don’t have the characters set out in my mind yet. Not even sure of the genre, comedy. drama, thriller.
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