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In a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities history must stop an evil corporation from enslaving the masses with its latest device.
Nice. Just needs polishing. Nothing fatal. I can see the story (Which is the logline's function after all ). The last bit reads less fluid than the start. From corporation isn't as good as the start. I know what you are saying. But, it could also mean, that the masses have the device and they are beRead more
Nice. Just needs polishing. Nothing fatal. I can see the story (Which is the logline’s function after all ). The last bit reads less fluid than the start. From corporation isn’t as good as the start. I know what you are saying. But, it could also mean, that the masses have the device and they are being enslaved. When I know you mean the corporation is using the device to enslave.
…to stop a corporation using its latest device to enslave the masses.
See lessIn a future where writing is forbidden and technology rules, the last Scribe, and an Android implanted with humanities history must stop an evil corporation from enslaving the masses with its latest device.
Nice. Just needs polishing. Nothing fatal. I can see the story (Which is the logline's function after all ). The last bit reads less fluid than the start. From corporation isn't as good as the start. I know what you are saying. But, it could also mean, that the masses have the device and they are beRead more
Nice. Just needs polishing. Nothing fatal. I can see the story (Which is the logline’s function after all ). The last bit reads less fluid than the start. From corporation isn’t as good as the start. I know what you are saying. But, it could also mean, that the masses have the device and they are being enslaved. When I know you mean the corporation is using the device to enslave.
…to stop a corporation using its latest device to enslave the masses.
See lessTo fulfill a lifetime dream a terminally ill man heads to the Grand Canyon. On the way he meets a homeless man and helps him reunite with his estranged family instead of finishing his trip.
(in my mind so far) The ill man encounters the homeless guys who has helped him out in some small way. He decides to repay the favor. By doing that, he learns more about the homeless man and decides to do something more important with his final days than look at the grand canyon. The homeless guy isRead more
(in my mind so far) The ill man encounters the homeless guys who has helped him out in some small way. He decides to repay the favor. By doing that, he learns more about the homeless man and decides to do something more important with his final days than look at the grand canyon. The homeless guy is not fully aware of the illness. He is still reluctant and is verging on sabotaging the reconciliation when the Ill man dies.
His death shows him that people are still good and that someone was willing to sacrifice something important to give him a second chance.
Just a few points so far. It looks like it is going to revolve around “seeing what other see in you” and “being willing to sacrifice something for someone else”. Maybe that we can achieve immorality through our good deeds.
I tend to discover midpoints and build stories out from there.
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