(in my mind so far) The ill man encounters the homeless guys who has helped him out in some small way. He decides to repay the favor. By doing that, he learns more about the homeless man and decides to do something more important with his final days than look at the grand canyon. The homeless guy is not fully aware of the illness. He is still reluctant and is verging on sabotaging the reconciliation when the Ill man dies.

His death shows him that people are still good and that someone was willing to sacrifice something important to give him a second chance.

Just a few points so far. It looks like it is going to revolve around “seeing what other see in you” and “being willing to sacrifice something for someone else”. Maybe that we can achieve immorality through our good deeds.

I tend to discover midpoints and build stories out from there.

In this world ghouls do the crocodile thing of killing and letting it rot before eating (crocs do eat fresh as well, ghouls don’t). This is a ” cabin in the woods” style action film (so far, as it sits in my head). Possibly all set around the crematorium.

I am glad with the feedback. It appears the idea make internal sense. Flaws I can’t plan. They show themselves during the draft. Every time I think I know the persons flaw, I end up changing it and rewriting. When I let them develop they don’t seem pushed, just my process I guess.

Thanks.