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A lazy but gifted high-school kid blackmails his adulterous parents and uses the money to start his own business, in an attempt to woo the girl of his dreams.
I think I can see where you are headed. Blackmail both parents? So they are both committing adultery and neither know? If that is correct, great, ignore me on that. Lazy but gifted. Is there another way to explain this that will also inform how he may act around the girl or what is he willing to doRead more
I think I can see where you are headed. Blackmail both parents? So they are both committing adultery and neither know? If that is correct, great, ignore me on that. Lazy but gifted. Is there another way to explain this that will also inform how he may act around the girl or what is he willing to do to win her over?
Highly intelligent and manipulative – A genius sociopath – A charming yet despicable… Something that can be used to build more of his character and let the reader know the sort of things he may do later in the story.
The girl, why would she be impressed by him owning a business. I can see this, like Good Charlotte sing “Girls don’t like boys, girls like cars and money”. But how do you handle it in the story. Knowing a bit about her will let people see how the story may interact. There is a difference between “Spoiled rich girl” and “Poor gold digger” with how they react to money.
Good luck.
See lessA lazy but gifted high-school kid blackmails his adulterous parents and uses the money to start his own business, in an attempt to woo the girl of his dreams.
I think I can see where you are headed. Blackmail both parents? So they are both committing adultery and neither know? If that is correct, great, ignore me on that. Lazy but gifted. Is there another way to explain this that will also inform how he may act around the girl or what is he willing to doRead more
I think I can see where you are headed. Blackmail both parents? So they are both committing adultery and neither know? If that is correct, great, ignore me on that. Lazy but gifted. Is there another way to explain this that will also inform how he may act around the girl or what is he willing to do to win her over?
Highly intelligent and manipulative – A genius sociopath – A charming yet despicable… Something that can be used to build more of his character and let the reader know the sort of things he may do later in the story.
The girl, why would she be impressed by him owning a business. I can see this, like Good Charlotte sing “Girls don’t like boys, girls like cars and money”. But how do you handle it in the story. Knowing a bit about her will let people see how the story may interact. There is a difference between “Spoiled rich girl” and “Poor gold digger” with how they react to money.
Good luck.
See lessThe last Scribe in a technology ruled false utopian future must unite with an android that contains the entirety of human history, before the ruling corporation can enact their final technological control onto the masses.
I have heard 25 or less, 35 or less, one sentence.... I think if you need 6 feet of rope, 5 feet 11 inches is a failure. Be as brief and concise as you can, it shows a professional command of the language. But use as many words as you need. The story is king not the word count.
I have heard 25 or less, 35 or less, one sentence…. I think if you need 6 feet of rope, 5 feet 11 inches is a failure. Be as brief and concise as you can, it shows a professional command of the language. But use as many words as you need. The story is king not the word count.
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