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  1. Posted: February 14, 2015In: Public

    The last Scribe in a technology ruled false utopian future must unite with an android that contains the entirety of human history, before the ruling corporation can enact their final technological control onto the masses.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 15, 2015 at 2:00 pm

    I agree with dpg regarding what is so bad about the latest device. Doesn't have to be a huge explanation. Just a hint to why they want to stop it. ....its latest device which will enslave the masses" Otherwise I think you are hitting the beats. Especially if it is an action script. In an action scriRead more

    I agree with dpg regarding what is so bad about the latest device. Doesn’t have to be a huge explanation. Just a hint to why they want to stop it.

    ….its latest device which will enslave the masses”

    Otherwise I think you are hitting the beats. Especially if it is an action script. In an action script characters don’t always have to evolve. Sometime they stay the same and the world changes, look at “Winter Soldier” as an example.

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  2. Posted: February 14, 2015In: Public

    The last Scribe in a technology ruled false utopian future must unite with an android that contains the entirety of human history, before the ruling corporation can enact their final technological control onto the masses.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 15, 2015 at 2:00 pm

    I agree with dpg regarding what is so bad about the latest device. Doesn't have to be a huge explanation. Just a hint to why they want to stop it. ....its latest device which will enslave the masses" Otherwise I think you are hitting the beats. Especially if it is an action script. In an action scriRead more

    I agree with dpg regarding what is so bad about the latest device. Doesn’t have to be a huge explanation. Just a hint to why they want to stop it.

    ….its latest device which will enslave the masses”

    Otherwise I think you are hitting the beats. Especially if it is an action script. In an action script characters don’t always have to evolve. Sometime they stay the same and the world changes, look at “Winter Soldier” as an example.

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  3. Posted: February 14, 2015In: Public

    To fulfill a lifetime dream a terminally ill man heads to the Grand Canyon. On the way he meets a homeless man and helps him reunite with his estranged family instead of finishing his trip.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 15, 2015 at 1:48 pm

    kbfilmworks. Not really. This is the first time I have ever written a logline before starting a script. I normally have cards drawn up (I use Celtx card on my iPad), then a few scenes to find their voices. Then after that I might give a logline a go. This is truly just an idea.

    kbfilmworks. Not really. This is the first time I have ever written a logline before starting a script. I normally have cards drawn up (I use Celtx card on my iPad), then a few scenes to find their voices. Then after that I might give a logline a go.

    This is truly just an idea.

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