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  1. Posted: January 17, 2015In: Public

    A good looking law student's privileged lifestyle is turned upside as he's lured deeper and deeper into the sinister world of Dark Video.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 17, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    Everything above plus, what is the protagonist's goal? Is he trying to get out after being sucked in? Is he happy to say goodbye to his old life? Watch some really crap film and you'll see the protagonist doesn't have a real goal. They just drift from one event to another. You want to make sure yourRead more

    Everything above plus, what is the protagonist’s goal? Is he trying to get out after being sucked in? Is he happy to say goodbye to his old life?

    Watch some really crap film and you’ll see the protagonist doesn’t have a real goal. They just drift from one event to another. You want to make sure your logline doesn’t give that impression.

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  2. Posted: January 17, 2015In: Public

    A good looking law student's privileged lifestyle is turned upside as he's lured deeper and deeper into the sinister world of Dark Video.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 17, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    Everything above plus, what is the protagonist's goal? Is he trying to get out after being sucked in? Is he happy to say goodbye to his old life? Watch some really crap film and you'll see the protagonist doesn't have a real goal. They just drift from one event to another. You want to make sure yourRead more

    Everything above plus, what is the protagonist’s goal? Is he trying to get out after being sucked in? Is he happy to say goodbye to his old life?

    Watch some really crap film and you’ll see the protagonist doesn’t have a real goal. They just drift from one event to another. You want to make sure your logline doesn’t give that impression.

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    A teenage girl returns home to her whole family executed and must go undercover to find her family's killers where she finds that she isn't fully human.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 17, 2015 at 12:09 pm

    Answering the "must" is important. If it seems unrealistic in a logline it will remain so in your script. Looking forward to reading version2

    Answering the “must” is important. If it seems unrealistic in a logline it will remain so in your script. Looking forward to reading version2

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