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  1. Posted: January 15, 2015In: Public

    Plebe year just got worse for two military college cadets who stumble upon a plot by Cuban Americans to assassinate the President in retaliation for his normalizing relations with Cuba. It isn?t until minutes before the killing is to begin that the cadets discover what?s happening and race to stop the assassins? plan from succeeding.

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    Added an answer on January 15, 2015 at 1:15 pm

    How about you talk about the discovery and the ticking clock in the same sentence and save words. Something like "just minutes before Cubans assassinate the president the plot is discovered by two plebe year military cadets. They have just minutes...." You get the idea. Less words gives a feeling ofRead more

    How about you talk about the discovery and the ticking clock in the same sentence and save words. Something like “just minutes before Cubans assassinate the president the plot is discovered by two plebe year military cadets. They have just minutes….” You get the idea. Less words gives a feeling of pace, so trim this even more. Pace is important for an Acton film.

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  2. Posted: January 15, 2015In: Public

    Plebe year just got worse for two military college cadets who stumble upon a plot by Cuban Americans to assassinate the President in retaliation for his normalizing relations with Cuba. It isn?t until minutes before the killing is to begin that the cadets discover what?s happening and race to stop the assassins? plan from succeeding.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 15, 2015 at 1:15 pm

    How about you talk about the discovery and the ticking clock in the same sentence and save words. Something like "just minutes before Cubans assassinate the president the plot is discovered by two plebe year military cadets. They have just minutes...." You get the idea. Less words gives a feeling ofRead more

    How about you talk about the discovery and the ticking clock in the same sentence and save words. Something like “just minutes before Cubans assassinate the president the plot is discovered by two plebe year military cadets. They have just minutes….” You get the idea. Less words gives a feeling of pace, so trim this even more. Pace is important for an Acton film.

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  3. Posted: January 11, 2015In: Public

    Investigating a robbery at the State University of New York an FBI agent discovers the item taken was a sample from the Shroud of Turin. This leads him to a conflict with a well funded murderous group of fanatics determined to clone Jesus.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 3:11 pm

    Great Title. Thanks.

    Great Title. Thanks.

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