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A bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.
I have had this question for a while. Why would the killer care about the hostages? If you are looking to reduce words "arriving" could be dropped. The "alternate reality" covers arrival. I think everyone is coming from the same point. It is a great scenario, but why are we here watching these peoplRead more
I have had this question for a while. Why would the killer care about the hostages?
If you are looking to reduce words “arriving” could be dropped. The “alternate reality” covers arrival.
I think everyone is coming from the same point. It is a great scenario, but why are we here watching these people? I know it is in the story. Can you get the essence of why into the logline?
I once read the Titanic logline, it was something like “a girl from high society trying to escape her controlling fianc? falls in love with a penny less artist on board Titanic”.
All focused on something to care about.
See lessA bounty hunter arriving from an alternate reality holds bar patrons hostage in order to trap a fugitive killer but soon discovers one of the hostages may be more dangerous than the expected fugitive.
I have had this question for a while. Why would the killer care about the hostages? If you are looking to reduce words "arriving" could be dropped. The "alternate reality" covers arrival. I think everyone is coming from the same point. It is a great scenario, but why are we here watching these peoplRead more
I have had this question for a while. Why would the killer care about the hostages?
If you are looking to reduce words “arriving” could be dropped. The “alternate reality” covers arrival.
I think everyone is coming from the same point. It is a great scenario, but why are we here watching these people? I know it is in the story. Can you get the essence of why into the logline?
I once read the Titanic logline, it was something like “a girl from high society trying to escape her controlling fianc? falls in love with a penny less artist on board Titanic”.
All focused on something to care about.
See lessInvestigating a robbery at the State University of New York an FBI agent discovers the item taken was a sample from the Shroud of Turin. This leads him to a conflict with a well funded murderous group of fanatics determined to clone Jesus.
I originally drafted this as a Novel about 5 years ago and therefore the story has multiple storylines. I was thinking the FBI guy was a good way of letting the audience discover facts as he did. The Zealots believe they are bringing Jesus back as Jesus put in place the technology that would lead toRead more
I originally drafted this as a Novel about 5 years ago and therefore the story has multiple storylines. I was thinking the FBI guy was a good way of letting the audience discover facts as he did. The Zealots believe they are bringing Jesus back as Jesus put in place the technology that would lead to cloning. Hence they are doing God’s work.
They operate under the cover of IVF clinics which fund them and give them access to some of the tech they need.
We filmed a scene from it. We did it for the Rode Film Competition. It’s on YouTube if you want to see it. Search for “blood brother” and my name Craig Griffiths.
See lessThanks for the help. If I sell it free drinks are on there way.