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  1. Posted: January 11, 2015In: Public

    Investigating a robbery at the State University of New York an FBI agent discovers the item taken was a sample from the Shroud of Turin. This leads him to a conflict with a well funded murderous group of fanatics determined to clone Jesus.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 11:21 am

    I originally drafted this as a Novel about 5 years ago and therefore the story has multiple storylines. I was thinking the FBI guy was a good way of letting the audience discover facts as he did. The Zealots believe they are bringing Jesus back as Jesus put in place the technology that would lead toRead more

    I originally drafted this as a Novel about 5 years ago and therefore the story has multiple storylines. I was thinking the FBI guy was a good way of letting the audience discover facts as he did. The Zealots believe they are bringing Jesus back as Jesus put in place the technology that would lead to cloning. Hence they are doing God’s work.

    They operate under the cover of IVF clinics which fund them and give them access to some of the tech they need.

    We filmed a scene from it. We did it for the Rode Film Competition. It’s on YouTube if you want to see it. Search for “blood brother” and my name Craig Griffiths.
    Thanks for the help. If I sell it free drinks are on there way.

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  2. Posted: January 12, 2015In: Public

    After the death of his wife, A confident salesman is sent to prison for assault and his children put in care, upon his release he enlist the help of his brother lawyer to regain custody but is he stable and will the children have bonded with the foster parents.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 11:06 am

    Is the death of his wife part of the story or is it just to indicate that her is a single parent? You can't fit in all the motivations, just the big ones. Is it important that he is confident to help the logline? I think you can drop it. Plus don't ask a question, that is for marketing Tagline linesRead more

    Is the death of his wife part of the story or is it just to indicate that her is a single parent? You can’t fit in all the motivations, just the big ones. Is it important that he is confident to help the logline? I think you can drop it. Plus don’t ask a question, that is for marketing Tagline lines.

    After serving xx years a single dad enlists the help of his lawyer brother to gain custody of his child but….

    State the obstacle. People will read your script to see how he gets over it.

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  3. Posted: January 12, 2015In: Public

    After the death of his wife, A confident salesman is sent to prison for assault and his children put in care, upon his release he enlist the help of his brother lawyer to regain custody but is he stable and will the children have bonded with the foster parents.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 13, 2015 at 11:06 am

    Is the death of his wife part of the story or is it just to indicate that her is a single parent? You can't fit in all the motivations, just the big ones. Is it important that he is confident to help the logline? I think you can drop it. Plus don't ask a question, that is for marketing Tagline linesRead more

    Is the death of his wife part of the story or is it just to indicate that her is a single parent? You can’t fit in all the motivations, just the big ones. Is it important that he is confident to help the logline? I think you can drop it. Plus don’t ask a question, that is for marketing Tagline lines.

    After serving xx years a single dad enlists the help of his lawyer brother to gain custody of his child but….

    State the obstacle. People will read your script to see how he gets over it.

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