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  1. Posted: January 10, 2015In: Public

    After taking human form, getting married, and having a child of his own, the ancient child eating (though newly reformed) Boogeyman must protect his oblivious human family when he suspects a new monster may lurking under the bed of his son….planning to out the horrible secret of his past life.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 11, 2015 at 12:56 pm

    Good concept by the way. Has space to breath.

    Good concept by the way. Has space to breath.

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  2. Posted: January 10, 2015In: Public

    After taking human form, getting married, and having a child of his own, the ancient child eating (though newly reformed) Boogeyman must protect his oblivious human family when he suspects a new monster may lurking under the bed of his son….planning to out the horrible secret of his past life.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 11, 2015 at 12:54 pm

    I didn't get the "becoming human", taking form for me is like wearing a mask, you can change back. I think the "reformed" statement isn't needed. To become human I assumed he had somehow changed his ways. The last sentence nearly reduces tension. Just having a boogeyman under the bed is bad enough,Read more

    I didn’t get the “becoming human”, taking form for me is like wearing a mask, you can change back. I think the “reformed” statement isn’t needed. To become human I assumed he had somehow changed his ways. The last sentence nearly reduces tension. Just having a boogeyman under the bed is bad enough, we all know what that can mean.

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  3. Posted: January 10, 2015In: Public

    After taking human form, getting married, and having a child of his own, the ancient child eating (though newly reformed) Boogeyman must protect his oblivious human family when he suspects a new monster may lurking under the bed of his son….planning to out the horrible secret of his past life.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 11, 2015 at 12:54 pm

    I didn't get the "becoming human", taking form for me is like wearing a mask, you can change back. I think the "reformed" statement isn't needed. To become human I assumed he had somehow changed his ways. The last sentence nearly reduces tension. Just having a boogeyman under the bed is bad enough,Read more

    I didn’t get the “becoming human”, taking form for me is like wearing a mask, you can change back. I think the “reformed” statement isn’t needed. To become human I assumed he had somehow changed his ways. The last sentence nearly reduces tension. Just having a boogeyman under the bed is bad enough, we all know what that can mean.

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