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In a post apocalyptic Mexico, a pregnant teen risks her life to cross the closed border so her son can be born an American citizen.
Great. You could add more but why? It ticks all the boxes for me. Protagonist I can care about. I ticking clock, do it while she can and before she gives birth. Heightened stakes, with the apocalypse, plus the extra effort of closed borders. You have stated a clear goal. Well done.
Great. You could add more but why? It ticks all the boxes for me. Protagonist I can care about. I ticking clock, do it while she can and before she gives birth. Heightened stakes, with the apocalypse, plus the extra effort of closed borders. You have stated a clear goal. Well done.
See lessIn a post apocalyptic Mexico, a pregnant teen risks her life to cross the closed border so her son can be born an American citizen.
Great. You could add more but why? It ticks all the boxes for me. Protagonist I can care about. I ticking clock, do it while she can and before she gives birth. Heightened stakes, with the apocalypse, plus the extra effort of closed borders. You have stated a clear goal. Well done.
Great. You could add more but why? It ticks all the boxes for me. Protagonist I can care about. I ticking clock, do it while she can and before she gives birth. Heightened stakes, with the apocalypse, plus the extra effort of closed borders. You have stated a clear goal. Well done.
See lessA bounty hunter who foresees danger just before it happens holds patrons of a sleazy bar hostage in order to trap a killer with mental superpowers from an alternate reality.
I try to answer these questions in a logline (with little success sometimes). Who is the protagonist? What do they want? What is stopping them? Why is it stopping them? What can they do? Bounty Hunter, that gives us protagonist and what he wants, tick. The rest I am unsure about. What are the mentalRead more
I try to answer these questions in a logline (with little success sometimes).
Who is the protagonist? What do they want? What is stopping them? Why is it stopping them? What can they do?
Bounty Hunter, that gives us protagonist and what he wants, tick.
The rest I am unsure about. What are the mental superpowers? When you say Bounty Hunter you get free information passed on. We know what a Bounty Hunter does. Mental Superpowers could be anything.
What is stopping him and what can he do? Plus is the bar important and why?
I mention a valley in one of my loglines to show there are no resources available like in a city. If the bar isn’t important save the words and use them to add more story.
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