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  1. Posted: February 24, 2019In: Drama

    Amongst the Manchester riots of 1981, a union official?s young son watches as union corruption drives his father to a fatal heart attack. Years later and the son returns as a union official to fight redundancies for the same union men who killed his father.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 25, 2019 at 7:31 am

    You need a backdrop. The goal of the character and events should be a demonstration of the emotional journey the character takes. Is he keen to do the right thing? Is he keen to make the union better? A union leader travel to Manchester to fight redundancy as part of the same corrupt Union that causRead more

    You need a backdrop. The goal of the character and events should be a demonstration of the emotional journey the character takes. Is he keen to do the right thing? Is he keen to make the union better?

    A union leader travel to Manchester to fight redundancy as part of the same corrupt Union that caused his father?s fatal heart attack in 1981.

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  2. Posted: February 17, 2019In: Thriller

    A young psychic lives a virtual hermit?s life until he sees his own death, he must try to figure out the events that lead to his death in a hope of preventing them.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 18, 2019 at 2:29 pm

    A young psychic that's experiences the death of the people he encounters becomes a hermit, until he sees his own death and must enter society with all its pain in a hope of discovering what leads to him dying and prevent it.

    A young psychic that’s experiences the death of the people he encounters becomes a hermit, until he sees his own death and must enter society with all its pain in a hope of discovering what leads to him dying and prevent it.

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  3. Posted: February 17, 2019In: Thriller

    A young psychic lives a virtual hermit?s life until he sees his own death, he must try to figure out the events that lead to his death in a hope of preventing them.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 18, 2019 at 6:48 am

    While trying to shorten the line, I dropped the fact that he hides away because he sees a person?s fate when he is in their company.So the only way to stop seeing people die, is to hide.

    While trying to shorten the line, I dropped the fact that he hides away because he sees a person?s fate when he is in their company.

    So the only way to stop seeing people die, is to hide.

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