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An awkward pre teen girl tries desperatley to survive her middle school years despite the fact that her home life is utterly unstable. She lives in poverty with a drug addicted, bipolar, suicidal mother who continually bounces from husband to husband with no regard for her children.
Think of the emotional heart of this story and you will be on steady ground. ?You will also be able to write a more concise logline. What do you see as the reasons she is desperate to fit in? How will it effect her if she doesn?t? ?You could also link it to an event, unless it is a logline for a serRead more
Think of the emotional heart of this story and you will be on steady ground. ?You will also be able to write a more concise logline.
What do you see as the reasons she is desperate to fit in? How will it effect her if she doesn?t? ?You could also link it to an event, unless it is a logline for a series.
An awkward girl from a horribly dysfunctional family is desperate to find her place in middle school after the only positive thing in her life, her best friend leaves.
See lessA young broken girl, released from an orphanage, finally found the love and acceptance she only dreams of when she marries a respected deacon only to discover she and her children are in the fight of their lives to escape a secretly abusive husband and to ultimately find her own true spiritual identity. BTW – This is a re-write from 2 days ago.
The timeline is the issue and there is an emotional centre not mentioned. The timeline issue, why now is the fight for her life? She?s has had a few children to this man. So that is at least a few years of marriage. We can drop a lot of the first act baggage. Orphans crave love, so by saying orphanRead more
The timeline is the issue and there is an emotional centre not mentioned. The timeline issue, why now is the fight for her life? She?s has had a few children to this man. So that is at least a few years of marriage. We can drop a lot of the first act baggage. Orphans crave love, so by saying orphan you get that stuff for free.
?After growing up in an orphanage a woman is willing to endure abuse from her preacher husband until he turn on their children put her in a fight for her life?
See lessWhen his brother returns after 12 years with the mob on his trail, a shrewd farmer must find a way to take them all out first, whatever the cost.
Why is the farmer world weary it would appear the brother is the traveller. That is confusing. If the farmer has been travelling why is that important to the story. You don?t need to add colour for the sake of it, only if it impacts on the story and helps paint a better picture. A farmer must take oRead more
Why is the farmer world weary it would appear the brother is the traveller. That is confusing. If the farmer has been travelling why is that important to the story. You don?t need to add colour for the sake of it, only if it impacts on the story and helps paint a better picture.
A farmer must take out the mob hitmen that are pursuing his brother that has returned after years on the run.
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