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The life of a well known assassin becomes chaotic when he finds he purchased the daughter of an old rival at a slave market, leaving him the choice to give her back to spare himself or keep her and die.
Being specific is your friend. Turning a world upside down isn?t a story. It can be used for nearly anything and that is the problem. How is his world turned upside down. ?Is he now being pursued? ?Is he in love with her, when he should kill her for revenge? Give us a goal, action, obstacle combinatRead more
Being specific is your friend. Turning a world upside down isn?t a story. It can be used for nearly anything and that is the problem.
How is his world turned upside down. ?Is he now being pursued? ?Is he in love with her, when he should kill her for revenge?
Give us a goal, action, obstacle combination.
See lessAfter his girlfriend is kidnapped, an insecure stickler for the rules is forced to put himself into increasingly more dangerous and illegal situations over the course of one night in order to get the money to rescue her, while being chased by the entire police force of his town.
This has all the elements, but needs tightening. Does all that explanation about him push the story? Perhaps another word or phrase, or even drop it. So how does what he do raise money? Can we put them into a collection and explain that? How does he know these places and situation even exist? ?I wilRead more
This has all the elements, but needs tightening.
Does all that explanation about him push the story? Perhaps another word or phrase, or even drop it.
So how does what he do raise money? Can we put them into a collection and explain that? How does he know these places and situation even exist? ?I will have a punt and see what happens.
I will make the assumption that his girlfriend knows some of these people. ?Otherwise having her as a target doesn?t make sense.
Here is my take.
A timid guy is forced to engage with drug dealers and criminals from his girlfriends wild past to get money to pay her ransom triggering a deadly consequences and making a target for the local cops.
See lessA millionaire buys a 77-year-old plane. The broken machine will be restored for five years. After that, he and his son fly on historic routes around the world.
Flying to xxxxx in their restored plain a father and son encounter xxxxx which must xxxxx or xxxxxx This may be how you could set out your logline.
Flying to xxxxx in their restored plain a father and son encounter xxxxx which must xxxxx or xxxxxx
This may be how you could set out your logline.
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