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A stubborn, US ex-soldier (28) is resurrected from hell to change humanity for the better, upon sacrificing his soul to hell.
There is a timeline problem. When did he sacrifice his soul to hell. How does that relate to the story. I am guessing this is the story. After selling his soul to hell a marine is resurrected to change humanity for the better and earn his place in heaven. (Perhaps)
There is a timeline problem. When did he sacrifice his soul to hell. How does that relate to the story. I am guessing this is the story.
After selling his soul to hell a marine is resurrected to change humanity for the better and earn his place in heaven. (Perhaps)
See lessAfter being rejected by his daughter (21), a corrupt NYPD officer (47) decides to turn over a new leaf and initiate a massive undercover operation in order to prove his daughter that he?s changed and make her proud of him.
This reads like two separate stories. There isn?t enough connective tissue between the two aspects. If you remove the daughter story it still works because police take on crime bosses. I think you need to attack the heart of the story.
This reads like two separate stories. There isn?t enough connective tissue between the two aspects.
If you remove the daughter story it still works because police take on crime bosses.
I think you need to attack the heart of the story.
See lessA special unit must survive against civilians that have turned into flesh-eating demons on a moving train that was hit by a strange meteor and get to the engine room before it crashes.
Let?s just accept we are talking about Zombies. So let?s give the special unit a goal and you are done. This is never going to win an Oscar, but it?s a story. Here we go: A special unit must fight their way through passengers that have been turned into Zombies by a strange meteor; to reach the frontRead more
Let?s just accept we are talking about Zombies.
So let?s give the special unit a goal and you are done. This is never going to win an Oscar, but it?s a story.
Here we go:
A special unit must fight their way through passengers that have been turned into Zombies by a strange meteor; to reach the front of a speeding train to stop it before it crashes
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