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When Jack saw a dream that his only daughter killed by a boy ?jack try to find and kill that boy?
The only thing I would add to jacksparrow?s answer is to make the dream more concrete. You have to let people know her murder is 100% without his action.
The only thing I would add to jacksparrow?s answer is to make the dream more concrete.
You have to let people know her murder is 100% without his action.
See lessVERSION A: “Consumed by fear of his impending mortality, a 31-year-old man race against time to break an ancient curse that kills all males in his lineage by age 32.” VERSION B: “A 31-year-old man races against time to break an ancient curse that kills all males in his lineage by age 32.”
I like version B. If you knew you are dying fear is an obvious outcome. Add in an emotion if you can use it to subvert the audience expectations. For example ?turned on by death ..?
I like version B. If you knew you are dying fear is an obvious outcome. Add in an emotion if you can use it to subvert the audience expectations. For example ?turned on by death ..?
See lessIs it interesting? For non climbing audience
Does he try? What happens when he fails? Who is pushing him and why? The ice climbing is just a setting for a story. ?Dances with Wolves? and ?Avatar? are the same story told in different settings.
Does he try? What happens when he fails? Who is pushing him and why?
The ice climbing is just a setting for a story. ?Dances with Wolves? and ?Avatar? are the same story told in different settings.
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