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A group is held by a madman who is killing them one by one until they identify the traitors securing their freedom.
It is true that it is easier to tell a story through a single person. This is because we need a POV. But since everyone is getting the same information at the same time, in the same place , it is a shared experience. Therefore the group can be treated as a protagonist. I see you (collective term) maRead more
It is true that it is easier to tell a story through a single person. This is because we need a POV. But since everyone is getting the same information at the same time, in the same place , it is a shared experience. Therefore the group can be treated as a protagonist.
I see you (collective term) may have tripped up on how the traitors work in the story. They work for the madman. Let me think of a rewrite.
See lessWhen illness and havoc spread across England, Queen Elizabeth I must confront the Devil and save her kingdom.
I have a single bit of feedback. If I was looking for a film to produce, you have given we four words to assess, ?must confront the devil?. I have to now make an entire film in my mind because you haven?t given me anything. QE1 must enter hell and endure a series of moral tortures based on her own aRead more
I have a single bit of feedback. If I was looking for a film to produce, you have given we four words to assess, ?must confront the devil?.
I have to now make an entire film in my mind because you haven?t given me anything.
QE1 must enter hell and endure a series of moral tortures based on her own actions as queen to defeat the devil and save England from a pandemic.
My version is crap. But you have an idea of the shape of the movie. Set in hell, a few demons perhaps … that sort of thing.
See lessAged out of foster care, Eric Grid needs to learn magic if he wants to become rich competing in a high stakes poker league controlled by the mafia.
This is much better. Just show how the magic and poker are linked
This is much better.
Just show how the magic and poker are linked
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