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  1. Posted: December 3, 2018In: Drama

    When a neglected daughter is adopted by a wealthy and powerful man, she must fight her reckless, power hungry mother to keep her new world from falling apart.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 3, 2018 at 7:37 am

    Must fight is too vague. When you write the story there will be a Central dramatic question. This will be demonstrated through an event. Tell us that.

    Must fight is too vague. When you write the story there will be a Central dramatic question. This will be demonstrated through an event. Tell us that.

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  2. Posted: December 1, 2018In: Thriller

    A Secret Service agent kills the President to save the Presidency. 20 years later, he must help save his estranged daughter, the newest President, when she is taken hostage.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 3, 2018 at 7:32 am

    The biggest problem is you have a really cool open shot and you are desperate for us to see it. Link it to the story and it will make sense. Also stop with the cryptic sentence, does you no favours.

    The biggest problem is you have a really cool open shot and you are desperate for us to see it.

    Link it to the story and it will make sense. Also stop with the cryptic sentence, does you no favours.

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  3. Posted: December 1, 2018In: Crime

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    Added an answer on December 1, 2018 at 2:03 pm

    In a world of magic and poker a player meets a friend of his dead father and..... This is how a logline works. The quickest way through a story

    In a world of magic and poker a player meets a friend of his dead father and…..

    This is how a logline works.

    The quickest way through a story

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