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  1. Posted: November 21, 2018In: Crime

    With dreams to box at the 2000 Sydney Olympics and provide for his family, a young man is offered a more profitable career by a charismatic crime figure clashing with his values, beliefs and kind-hearted nature.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 21, 2018 at 2:03 pm

    What?s a blue lantern?

    What?s a blue lantern?

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  2. Posted: November 20, 2018In: Drama

    There we go again: A once-shining high-school choir lead vocalist battles her dire situation by using her singing talent to elevate herself to the heights of success after her father suddenly goes broke.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 21, 2018 at 6:45 am

    The problem you have is ?elevate herself?. That lacks struggle, it sounds like having a meal. Oh well dad?s broke, got go elevate myself. Give us an example or how she is going to attempt it, or better still how you are going to show us. ?Once a choir singing starts performing to sleazy bars to makeRead more

    The problem you have is ?elevate herself?. That lacks struggle, it sounds like having a meal. Oh well dad?s broke, got go elevate myself.

    Give us an example or how she is going to attempt it, or better still how you are going to show us.

    ?Once a choir singing starts performing to sleazy bars to make a living when she is discovers by a record produce; only to find big business is just as sleazy and far more dangerous.?

    Really long, but you know exactly what the story is.

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  3. Posted: November 15, 2018In: Thriller

    After waking up in cells with only a 12-hour countdown and a row of switches on the wall, two individuals must figure out how to work together in isolation in order to escape.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 16, 2018 at 12:00 pm

    We can figure stuff out here.? But there seems to be a lack on connection to all the elements that I think would make a great logline. We dont' need to know that they have just woken up, so you can save some words there.? Plus it isn't clear that they are in separate cells. Plus the switches play aRead more

    We can figure stuff out here.? But there seems to be a lack on connection to all the elements that I think would make a great logline.

    We dont’ need to know that they have just woken up, so you can save some words there.? Plus it isn’t clear that they are in separate cells. Plus the switches play a part in the story how?? The count down clock?

    I am going to try and tie this together.

    Two inmates in adjoining isolation cells have 12 hours to solve figure out the correct combination in a twelve switch array to open their cells and escape their execution.

    I had to guess the reason for the count down.

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