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A rookie female detective, out to prove herself, is tasked with protecting a single mother and her son when a serial killer learns that the young boy claims to be the re-incarnation of one of his victims, and tries to kill him again.
There is a bit of double proof here. Rookie coo & out to prove herself, not exactly the same but close enough you could drop one. You could also drop the - tries to kill him again line. She is protecting him for that reason. Remove this and see how it speeds it up.
There is a bit of double proof here.
Rookie coo & out to prove herself, not exactly the same but close enough you could drop one.
You could also drop the – tries to kill him again line. She is protecting him for that reason.
Remove this and see how it speeds it up.
See lessA man makes numerous phone calls trying to negotiate his own safety while travelling to his gangster boss to confess his failure, finally having to settle for saving his family from revenge.
Being responsible for bringing an undercover cop into their organisation a gangster travels to see his boss while making a series of calls trying to rescue the situation finally settling on just being able to save his family.
Being responsible for bringing an undercover cop into their organisation a gangster travels to see his boss while making a series of calls trying to rescue the situation finally settling on just being able to save his family.
See lessA man makes numerous phone calls trying to negotiate his own safety while travelling to his gangster boss to confess his failure, finally having to settle for saving his family from revenge.
Hi All, Interested in your questions and rewrite suggestions.? I am planning on shooting this late this year.? It is a single person story.? He knows he will not be able to outrun his fate.? He set up a drug deal involving an undercover cop (who he had vouched for).? He is travelling to see his bossRead more
Hi All,
Interested in your questions and rewrite suggestions.? I am planning on shooting this late this year.? It is a single person story.? He knows he will not be able to outrun his fate.? He set up a drug deal involving an undercover cop (who he had vouched for).? He is travelling to see his boss, all the time making calls and trying to wheel and deal his way out of it.? Finally the best he can hope for is that his boss will not take out his entire family as pay back.
I am attempting to have the audience feel conflicted.? A bad guy, meeting a bad end, but the audience feels bad for him.
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