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A top cop receives a rookie partner to help him to down a drug cartel after losing his old partner to the same cartel.
Your stakes and goals don?t line up. A goal has to have a stake opposing it. If there is one Apple left and we both want it there is conflict. I want an Apple, you want a Banana there is no conflict. You have given us a list of goals, we can assume each of them have the appropriate challenges. You mRead more
Your stakes and goals don?t line up.
A goal has to have a stake opposing it. If there is one Apple left and we both want it there is conflict. I want an Apple, you want a Banana there is no conflict. You have given us a list of goals, we can assume each of them have the appropriate challenges.
You may be better off picking one and giving us the conflict around that.
See lessWhen two siblings piece together the truth behind the ?Here be dragons? symbols on medieval maps, and learn of the possible existence of the last remaining dragon, powerful opposing forces converge in a see-sawing battle of wits, steel, meerkats, and witty repartee.
It?s all a bit vague and has a bucket load of unneeded bits that are getting in the way of your story. When siblings discovery dragons exist.... Now don?t tell what you hope the story has, such as witty dialogue, tell us the story.
It?s all a bit vague and has a bucket load of unneeded bits that are getting in the way of your story.
When siblings discovery dragons exist….
Now don?t tell what you hope the story has, such as witty dialogue, tell us the story.
See lessA straight laced police detective must track down a serial killer brutally murdering children’s TV presenters.
This will sounds a little harsh. But you have described a cops job. It seems a bit straight forward. Slight twist, TV presenters. But that makes the cops job easier, a really small victim pool. Tell us what makes this special.
This will sounds a little harsh. But you have described a cops job. It seems a bit straight forward. Slight twist, TV presenters. But that makes the cops job easier, a really small victim pool.
Tell us what makes this special.
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