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When he is framed for the murder of his boss, a genetically engineered assassin must protect the boss’s daughter from his enemies to clear his name after he is hunted by three major Syndicates.
Remove ?makes it personal? and describe the story, rather set out to clear his name. Captures and tortures likely suspects to... Decides to kill his bosses enemies to ....
Remove ?makes it personal? and describe the story, rather set out to clear his name.
Captures and tortures likely suspects to…
See lessDecides to kill his bosses enemies to ….
After a miscalculation in a slipstream, a Roman space legion becomes stranded on a hellish world and must battle a powerful demon intent on shaping the legion into his own instrument to destroy Old Rome, their mother planet.
We can drop the slipstream reference because it doesn't progress the rest of the logline. You can also drop Old Roman and just say their mother planet. Knowing it's name doesn't move the story along. Put a rewrite in as a comment.
We can drop the slipstream reference because it doesn’t progress the rest of the logline.
You can also drop Old Roman and just say their mother planet. Knowing it’s name doesn’t move the story along.
Put a rewrite in as a comment.
See lessA former one of the best CIA Black ops agent is forced back into action after a transport of currency is stolen by an unknown group he was requested to transport.
The problem is that the two issues aren?t logically linked. He retires, the CIA still exists. They have other agents. This may have worked in the 80?s we need a connection now. Plus you tended to double underline the idea of the black ops. We did get the point. Tie them together with a bit of storyRead more
The problem is that the two issues aren?t logically linked. He retires, the CIA still exists. They have other agents. This may have worked in the 80?s we need a connection now.
Plus you tended to double underline the idea of the black ops. We did get the point.
Tie them together with a bit of story or complexity
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