1. Posted: October 25, 2018In:

    Two cops must stop a drug cartel from unleashing his narcotic on the city before everyone becomes addicted.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    When you have a story that is ?something do what it is supposed to do? you have to give it an angle. The two cops are working for a rival gang and are trying to stop this new cartel. It is a member of the cops family. You get it.

    When you have a story that is ?something do what it is supposed to do? you have to give it an angle.

    The two cops are working for a rival gang and are trying to stop this new cartel.

    It is a member of the cops family.

    You get it.

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  2. Posted: October 20, 2018In:

    A security expert is sent in undercover to examine a corporate prison?s security flaws and instead discovers massive corruption within the staff which leads to a powerful prisoner who is blackmailing the warden. [Some background information for those not in the U.S. Most prisons in the U.S. are owned and operated by publicly traded corporations. They have government contracts to run the prisons and are insanely profitable.]

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I feel once he discovers it a huge story could be told. Find Robert Redford?s Brubaker. A great story about a warden that goes undercover to find the problems in a prison. The story is really about how the corrupt prison system can survive everything.

    I feel once he discovers it a huge story could be told.

    Find Robert Redford?s Brubaker. A great story about a warden that goes undercover to find the problems in a prison. The story is really about how the corrupt prison system can survive everything.

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  3. Posted: October 20, 2018In:

    A young teen decides to run away from home in order to escape the abuses from his father.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    You have laid the ground work. Now give me the overall story. Running away to escape abuse a teen ...... Do they just find more abuse on the road. Do they finally come home and fix the problem, get dad arrested to save mum. There is so much gold for you to mine. Can you tell me how you plan to do itRead more

    You have laid the ground work. Now give me the overall story.

    Running away to escape abuse a teen ……

    Do they just find more abuse on the road. Do they finally come home and fix the problem, get dad arrested to save mum.

    There is so much gold for you to mine. Can you tell me how you plan to do it.

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