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Stand-alone episodes with a revolving cast determined to enter the psyche of viewers and leave behind irrational, unrealistic, or environmentally triggered fears and an ending that will be anything but happy!
Great pitch. But not a logline. You may want to use the word anthology.
Great pitch.
But not a logline. You may want to use the word anthology.
See lessA group of sister have a lengthy conversation trying to fill in the social, cultural and physiological blanks about a long extinct species: Humans.
It?s good to have intrigue but not confusion. If they are not human they are? Plus a conversation isn?t much of a story. What happens during the conversation? This is conversation fully of subtext about their relationship? I don?t see enough here to know what your story truly is and what it is aboutRead more
It?s good to have intrigue but not confusion. If they are not human they are?
Plus a conversation isn?t much of a story. What happens during the conversation? This is conversation fully of subtext about their relationship?
I don?t see enough here to know what your story truly is and what it is about.
This next sentence may seems a bit hard.
But your logline should show us how clever your story is, not how clever you are. Your logline is a witty little sentence with a sting in the tale. Shows you can write, but I am blind to the real story.
See lessA driver intent on picking up and murdering a hitch-hiker picks up a hitch-hiker intent on murdering a driver.
Yep. Nailed it. No need for a why, who they are, inciting incident. You have told the story which is exactly what a logline is supposed to do.
Yep. Nailed it.
No need for a why, who they are, inciting incident. You have told the story which is exactly what a logline is supposed to do.
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