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Kidnapped and caged, ten people are going to be killed one at a time until they identify the two traitors in their group, which will secure their release.
Hi guys thanks for the comments. I?ll answer and give my logic and hope it gets more ideas from people. Having no main character enables me to have the fate of the 10 truly up for grabs. If I had one main the viewers would know they are safe. I can make the audience care for someone than kill them.Read more
Hi guys thanks for the comments.
I?ll answer and give my logic and hope it gets more ideas from people.
Having no main character enables me to have the fate of the 10 truly up for grabs. If I had one main the viewers would know they are safe. I can make the audience care for someone than kill them. Never let the audience feel safe, make them panic as much as the characters.
The traitors are working with the kidnapper. They are part of the game, trying to get the group to turn on itself.
They are a group of completely random people, only one couple amongst them. Having ten of the same people gives me less scope, it is a bit monotone.
They are killed by a small explosive in a vest strapped to their chest. It is triggered remotely, so they can be punished for disobedience.
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"..dangerous game of wits unfolds" is the story.? Tell me that. What is the goal of the kidnapper? How is he going to get the guy to pay? What is the obstacles preventing him from being successful in reaching his goals. When a banker refuses to pay a ransom to save his estranged wife the kidnapper..Read more
“..dangerous game of wits unfolds” is the story.? Tell me that.
What is the goal of the kidnapper? How is he going to get the guy to pay? What is the obstacles preventing him from being successful in reaching his goals.
When a banker refuses to pay a ransom to save his estranged wife the kidnapper……
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What do we know about the kidnapper?
A kidnapper never intending to hurt his victim must find of either a way of releasing the hostage or getting the estranged husband to change his mind and pay the ransom.
Its a great set up, but you are not servicing your story.
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Misfits is by far the most overused and pointless word in any logline. For the reader to understand why someone is a misfit and what that looks like, they must first understand what the culture and normal people in that culture look and act like. Describe what makes them misfits. Also why is that imRead more
Misfits is by far the most overused and pointless word in any logline. For the reader to understand why someone is a misfit and what that looks like, they must first understand what the culture and normal people in that culture look and act like.
Describe what makes them misfits. Also why is that important to this story? They are wrestlers that immediately leave the world of wrestling.
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