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When a horde of zombies kill the sheriff of a sleepy frontier town, a penitent gunslinger, sentenced to hang, leads the townsfolk in their desperate fight for survival.
You did a lot of work to avoid the word Zombie. We all think Zombie, just say Zombie. How the Zombies are created isn?t important, so you can drop that. Penitent and seeking redemption is much the same so chose one and work with that. A gunslinger sentenced to hang leads a town in a war against NatiRead more
You did a lot of work to avoid the word Zombie. We all think Zombie, just say Zombie. How the Zombies are created isn?t important, so you can drop that.
Penitent and seeking redemption is much the same so chose one and work with that.
A gunslinger sentenced to hang leads a town in a war against Native American zombies.
Now add some colour to that and you?re done.
I?d see it.
See lessSet in the near future: When his neighbourhood is raided by a violent vigilante squad, a gang-member must venture through enemy territory to get his 5 year old daughter to sanctuary before they are killed.
I know the problem. Drop the inciting incident. It isn?t tied close enough to the struggle to make sense in the logline. Plus sanctuary is vague. But here is a refined version. A gangster much sneak his daughter through enemy territory to reach safety while being pursued by vigilantes.
I know the problem.
Drop the inciting incident. It isn?t tied close enough to the struggle to make sense in the logline. Plus sanctuary is vague. But here is a refined version.
A gangster much sneak his daughter through enemy territory to reach safety while being pursued by vigilantes.
See lessSet in the near future: When his neighbourhood is raided by a violent vigilante squad, a gang-member must venture through enemy territory to get his 5 year old daughter to sanctuary before they are killed.
For me there is some confusion. Enemy and vigilante are different people? If yes why are they both important? Plus what is sanctuary? It?s all a bit vague. Why is it important for us to know he is a gang member? This is probably wrong but how is this? Making a run through enemy territory for sanctuaRead more
For me there is some confusion. Enemy and vigilante are different people? If yes why are they both important? Plus what is sanctuary?
It?s all a bit vague. Why is it important for us to know he is a gang member?
This is probably wrong but how is this?
Making a run through enemy territory for sanctuary with his five year old daughter pursued closely you vigilantes.
There are so many aspects we don?t know. What makes the vigilantes move in? Can we get that in? Why does that make him run.
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