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Forced to flee a city, an irresponsible young man finds himself standing up to sinister elements to save souls in a mysterious secluded town where no one is allowed to leave.
You have s lot here. But you need to be specific to make it work. I am not a believer that you need to start your inciting incident, leave that for the script. You need to state the story in your logline and give enough detail so people know what the story is about. Sinister Elments could be anythinRead more
You have s lot here. But you need to be specific to make it work. I am not a believer that you need to start your inciting incident, leave that for the script. You need to state the story in your logline and give enough detail so people know what the story is about.
Sinister Elments could be anything from ghosts to a corrupt sheriff. Why aren?t people allowed to leave and is it important to the main story.
I think the boy standing up for a town that isn?t his feels like the story. But I can?t be sure. Can we have some specifics please.
See lessWhen a son is chosen to take over his father’s billion dollar company, he must adjust to the world of business and his newfound power.
Why is he unprepared and how is it demonstrated? When a socialist leaning son is chosen to take over his father?s billion dollar company he is tore when he must decide to preserve jobs or close a division for the sake of profit and maintaining his father?s legacy. This is a bit long and probably notRead more
Why is he unprepared and how is it demonstrated?
When a socialist leaning son is chosen to take over his father?s billion dollar company he is tore when he must decide to preserve jobs or close a division for the sake of profit and maintaining his father?s legacy.
This is a bit long and probably not your story, but you get the point.
See lessAn aging writer struggles to prove his worth by crafting the perfect logline but quickly spirals out of control when a brain tumor compels him to endlessly edit a single idea.
Sounds a bit like a French film. They can show the same thing over and over and make it work. Perhaps the hint of an outcome? But otherwise I can see the story.
Sounds a bit like a French film. They can show the same thing over and over and make it work.
Perhaps the hint of an outcome? But otherwise I can see the story.
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