1. Posted: August 5, 2018In:

    A man exploits his friends cocaine habit to finish a script by a deadline.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    This is more of a marketing line. Desparate to meet his deadline a writer is out of his depth trying get cocaine to feed his addicted more talented friend cocaine to write the screenplay. We need some action to understand the story.

    This is more of a marketing line.

    Desparate to meet his deadline a writer is out of his depth trying get cocaine to feed his addicted more talented friend cocaine to write the screenplay.

    We need some action to understand the story.

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  2. Posted: July 28, 2018In:

    Logline

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Think goal. After getting help for her son only to find he is getting worse a Mum ..... but ....... That sort of thing. But if getting help is half the story? Look for the one thread that ties the two halves and use that.

    Think goal.

    After getting help for her son only to find he is getting worse a Mum ….. but …….

    That sort of thing.

    But if getting help is half the story? Look for the one thread that ties the two halves and use that.

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  3. Posted: July 27, 2018In:

    A mentally & physically abused teen witnesses the murder of his family. Now an Adult, he enacts revenge on the entire family responsible.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    The only thing you need to add is some detail around the family responsible. Being specific in a logline that explains a well worn genre, like revenge. But you do get some free brain power from the reader because we all know what a revenge story looks like. The abuse adds to the depth of imagine I cRead more

    The only thing you need to add is some detail around the family responsible.

    Being specific in a logline that explains a well worn genre, like revenge. But you do get some free brain power from the reader because we all know what a revenge story looks like.

    The abuse adds to the depth of imagine I conjure when reading a logline.

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