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In an isolated castle the 12th in line to the Earl of Northwattington, a young man attends the late Earl?s will reading but one by one the heirs are being killed. He tries to save them but is undermined by his money hungry fianc
Hi Nir Not sure exactly how it ends. It is wordy, I will reword it to drop the word count. Try to stop a series of deaths in a comedy may be a goal. I?ll post a revision.
Hi Nir
Not sure exactly how it ends. It is wordy, I will reword it to drop the word count. Try to stop a series of deaths in a comedy may be a goal.
I?ll post a revision.
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Need to know what the deep history is? What tragedy? Being specific is your friend. Your logline is nearly a formula for writing a logline. An IT Manager with a hacker past is sacked after a huge cyber attack on his company ..... So how does the rest fit together. How did he lose everything? The lovRead more
Need to know what the deep history is? What tragedy?
Being specific is your friend. Your logline is nearly a formula for writing a logline.
An IT Manager with a hacker past is sacked after a huge cyber attack on his company …..
So how does the rest fit together. How did he lose everything? The love of his life, is that his job or his wife?
See lessIn an isolated castle the 12th in line to the Earl of Northwattington, a young man attends the late Earl?s will reading but one by one the heirs are being killed. He tries to save them but is undermined by his money hungry fianc
The more I think of it. I think an interesting angle may be that he is trying to save them. But they are so delusional that they can?t bwlieve that people are killing them. He is the only sensible person. His actions are to try and save them. This is also the tension with his fianc?. I am not even sRead more
The more I think of it. I think an interesting angle may be that he is trying to save them. But they are so delusional that they can?t bwlieve that people are killing them. He is the only sensible person. His actions are to try and save them. This is also the tension with his fianc?.
I am not even sure who is doing the killing or why yet.
I am using the logline to help me develop the thoughts and story.
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