1. Posted: June 27, 2018In:

    A man is informed he has one year to decides to do everything on his wife?s bucket list to maximise their time together, but she is to sad to enjoy the experience .

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    A man is informed he has one year to live and decides to do everything on his wife?s bucket list to maximise their time together, but she is to sad to enjoy the experience . I screwed up and missed a few words. But all your comments have been thought provoking

    A man is informed he has one year to live and decides to do everything on his wife?s bucket list to maximise their time together, but she is to sad to enjoy the experience .

    I screwed up and missed a few words. But all your comments have been thought provoking

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  2. Posted: June 27, 2018In:

    When he finds himself in the friend zone with the girl of his dreams his senior year of high school, a beta male must climb his way out of this inescapable trap before his Cinderella is stolen from him?.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    A high school senior thinks he must rise from beta-male to escape the friend-zone and win the woman of his dreams.

    A high school senior thinks he must rise from beta-male to escape the friend-zone and win the woman of his dreams.

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  3. Posted: June 26, 2018In:

    In the world of Remnant, the Faunus face oppression, deportation and subjugation at the hands of humanity. After a young Sienna Khan’s ambitious miners revolt ended in calamity she was pulled from the ruins by Kali of the resistance and her childhood friend, Ghira. With humanities war against the Faunus entering a new stage with Dr Merlot’s terrible machines of war, these young heroes may end up being all that stands between their people and being consigned to certain doom on Menagerie.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    You are lost in the first act. Try this. Two young people must ...... to.... but This is your story, not the mountain of setup you have us. Tell us your story. Don?t get carried away with inciting incidents or characters.

    You are lost in the first act. Try this.

    Two young people must …… to…. but

    This is your story, not the mountain of setup you have us.

    Tell us your story. Don?t get carried away with inciting incidents or characters.

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