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  1. Posted: June 15, 2018In: Coming of Age

    After hearing about a new ?cancer? that?s targeting people like him, a gay kids reality becomes much scarier than fiction in 1982 small town Indiana. Based on actual events, ten-year-old Billy joins a fundamental Baptist Church to avoid ?God?s Punishment? and try to pray away the feelings for his fourth grade crush but, instead, finds himself fighting for his young life which lies the hands of a church, community, and family that doesn?t want him to exist.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 17, 2018 at 1:20 pm

    During the 80?s AIDS epidemic a young gay boy joins a fundamentalist church to pray his way to safety. The reader will need some knowledge of the era.

    During the 80?s AIDS epidemic a young gay boy joins a fundamentalist church to pray his way to safety.

    The reader will need some knowledge of the era.

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2018In: Drama

    A doll maker that got blessed because he can reunites with his kid..

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 15, 2018 at 7:24 am

    Goal/obstacle demonstrated as an event or action to demonstrate emotion. A doll maker?s dolls come to life and uses this to bring his children back to life but .... (obstacle)

    Goal/obstacle demonstrated as an event or action to demonstrate emotion.

    A doll maker?s dolls come to life and uses this to bring his children back to life but …. (obstacle)

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  3. Posted: June 13, 2018In: Thriller

    When a family skiing trip ends in the murder of her parents, a sheltered teenager must lead her friends through a blizzard to escape a gang of vengeful hunters.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 13, 2018 at 1:30 pm

    Sheltered doesn?t add anything to her struggle and it isn?t really an personality that is easily identifiable. Vengeful about what? This has more confusion than mystery. Plus focusing on setting and an inciting incident can bury the story. A teenage girl must lead her friends through a blizzard pursRead more

    Sheltered doesn?t add anything to her struggle and it isn?t really an personality that is easily identifiable.

    Vengeful about what?

    This has more confusion than mystery.

    Plus focusing on setting and an inciting incident can bury the story.

    A teenage girl must lead her friends through a blizzard pursued by the hunters that murdered her parents on their family skiing holiday.

    Even so. A bit monotone. Does she fight back? Does she try and turn the tables?

    What can you tell the reader to make them interested?

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