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  1. Posted: June 5, 2018In: Drama

    The test

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 5, 2018 at 9:03 am

    Yep. Badly written. He is the sick one. He is willing to die rather than upset his daughter. She knows she is adopted, Mum told her when Mum was dying. But she promised Mum she would keep the secret.

    Yep. Badly written. He is the sick one. He is willing to die rather than upset his daughter.

    She knows she is adopted, Mum told her when Mum was dying. But she promised Mum she would keep the secret.

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  2. Posted: May 23, 2018In: Fantasy

    When people die when they touch the doctor he must defeat death, who chose him as his successor, to return to normality.

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    Added an answer on May 24, 2018 at 7:40 am

    after being chosen as the successor to the angel of death a doctor must defeat the angel in combat to return to saving life, not taking life. Must defeat is as vague as ?face his past?. Details is your friend.

    after being chosen as the successor to the angel of death a doctor must defeat the angel in combat to return to saving life, not taking life.

    Must defeat is as vague as ?face his past?. Details is your friend.

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  3. Posted: May 13, 2018In: SciFi

    Upon successful human cloning, the mother and the Military of USA destroy the Earth, to redefine ?Mankind? and ?Humanity? on a recreated Earth.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 15, 2018 at 11:03 am

    How is the story being told? Through whose eyes? Where is the conflict. All stories involve conflict. A person or group trying to achieve and being faced with obstacles or decisions. This (will sound cruel) is a shopping list of success.

    How is the story being told? Through whose eyes? Where is the conflict. All stories involve conflict. A person or group trying to achieve and being faced with obstacles or decisions.

    This (will sound cruel) is a shopping list of success.

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