1. Posted: June 10, 2018In:

    When the boy she meets turns out to be a werewolf like her, a sheltered girl begins a forbidden relationship with that helps express their beastly forms but runs the risk of being discovered by the paranoid hicks of her small town.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Yep, why forbidden? And how do they work against this force. Do they plan on running away. Then what is stopping them? This is the story. Think Romeo &Juliet in wolf clothes. That story is about families and their control. The only way to break free is to fake their deaths.

    Yep, why forbidden? And how do they work against this force. Do they plan on running away. Then what is stopping them? This is the story. Think Romeo &Juliet in wolf clothes. That story is about families and their control. The only way to break free is to fake their deaths.

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  2. Posted: June 11, 2018In:

    “To rescue his parents and save humanity, Renaissance artist Leonardo Da Vinci must destroy an intergalactic megalomaniac’s alien armada with his unproven inventions.”

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I think you have burried the story.... Leonardo DaVinci must use his .... to save his parents and humanity from a maniacal alien.

    I think you have burried the story….

    Leonardo DaVinci must use his …. to save his parents and humanity from a maniacal alien.

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  3. Posted: June 5, 2018In:

    The test

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    It?s a two hander in my head. Dad is being pressured to get the test and go on the register (friends family etc). Daughter is respecting his wishes, because is knows. People are judging her as well. Not 100% happy with the ending that?s in my head. She has an accident and that?s when the info comesRead more

    It?s a two hander in my head. Dad is being pressured to get the test and go on the register (friends family etc). Daughter is respecting his wishes, because is knows. People are judging her as well.

    Not 100% happy with the ending that?s in my head. She has an accident and that?s when the info comes out and they confess to each other.

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