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When her ex-husband and the love of her life is killed by a vicious drug-manufacturing motorcycle gang, a letter-of-the-law undercover cop infiltrates the gang but must battle addiction and her moral code especially when her estranged 10 year old daughter is kidnapped by the gang.
The first is the inciting incident and the abduction is a second act, mid-point event. Does the new version read better?
The first is the inciting incident and the abduction is a second act, mid-point event. Does the new version read better?
See lessHis optical implant switched off for non-payment of a loan, a 22nd Century private investigator must re-animate his hated android to help him solve the case of a missing billionaire robotics savant, in the process uncovering a militant group of androids and a maniacal Senator hell-bent on controlling the world
I think we have a winner, Sharkeatingman. I will use this from now on. Cheers.
I think we have a winner, Sharkeatingman. I will use this from now on. Cheers.
See lessHis optical implant switched off for non-payment of a loan, a 22nd Century private investigator must re-animate his hated android to help him solve the case of a missing billionaire robotics savant, in the process uncovering a militant group of androids and a maniacal Senator hell-bent on controlling the world
My thumbs up goes to Alfie, though Karel's point is taken. This is the revised logline: "Made blind when his optical implants are switched off for not paying a loan, a 22nd century private investigator must re-animate his hated android to help him solve the case of a missing robotics savant."
My thumbs up goes to Alfie, though Karel’s point is taken. This is the revised logline: “Made blind when his optical implants are switched off for not paying a loan, a 22nd century private investigator must re-animate his hated android to help him solve the case of a missing robotics savant.”
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