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  1. Posted: June 15, 2015In: Public

    After a suicide attempt, a girl meets a man in the psych-ward, claiming to be a captured superhero; she becomes his only hope for survival.

    cryters Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 15, 2015 at 11:20 am

    This is much better than your first logline post but, like Nir says, the final clause in your sentence needs to evoke a sense of what's at stake Hospitalised after a suicide attempt, a girl meets a man in the psych-ward who convinces her that he has super-powers and needs her help to escape certainRead more

    This is much better than your first logline post but, like Nir says, the final clause in your sentence needs to evoke a sense of what’s at stake

    Hospitalised after a suicide attempt, a girl meets a man in the psych-ward who convinces her that he has super-powers and needs her help to escape certain death at the hands of his nemesis who wants to absorb his powers and destroy the world.

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  2. Posted: June 15, 2015In: Public

    When a bullied kid finds a terrifying but badly wounded alien, he rallies his family and friends to help get it back to it's spaceship.

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    Added an answer on June 15, 2015 at 11:13 am

    Agree with all the comments above. Sounds too much like ET right now and needs a description that distinguishes from that movie.

    Agree with all the comments above. Sounds too much like ET right now and needs a description that distinguishes from that movie.

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  3. Posted: June 15, 2015In: Public

    A deadly fungus outbreak at a secret UN lab brings special forces soldier to defy his orders to save an old love… and human kind.

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    Added an answer on June 15, 2015 at 11:10 am

    When a deadly virus at a secret UN lab breaks out, a special forces soldier goes AWOL to save his scientist girlfriend from death but his actions inadvertently become the vehicle for mankind's possible destruction.

    When a deadly virus at a secret UN lab breaks out, a special forces soldier goes AWOL to save his scientist girlfriend from death but his actions inadvertently become the vehicle for mankind’s possible destruction.

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