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When an escaped and injured circus wolf is found in the bush, a selfish boy denied owning a dog nurses the wolf in his wardrobe hiding it from his mother’s prying eyes, a determined dog catcher and the cruel circus owner who wants to give the wolf to an animal testing laboratory.
Either works. Well done. Love it!
Either works. Well done. Love it!
See lessWhen her ex-husband and the love of her life is killed by a vicious drug-manufacturing motorcycle gang, a letter-of-the-law undercover cop infiltrates the gang but must battle addiction and her moral code especially when her estranged 10 year old daughter is kidnapped by the gang.
Yep; point taken about the long and verbose logline - I knew that from the beginning. No; the child being kidnapped is not an inciting Incident in my story and is also too cliched anyway (cf. Taken). Perhaps I should leave out the addiction and the kidnapping, although I'd included those to highlighRead more
Yep; point taken about the long and verbose logline – I knew that from the beginning. No; the child being kidnapped is not an inciting Incident in my story and is also too cliched anyway (cf. Taken). Perhaps I should leave out the addiction and the kidnapping, although I’d included those to highlight the stakes my heroine faced and had to overcome. But like I said, they were midpoint events and probably don’t belong in a logline. Thoughts anyone?
See lessA religious zealot grows the devil in the lab, using him to scare people back to the church, only to loose control of his creation.
I like what FFF said although the 'what happens' question he asks is answered in that he devil is let loose on the world, right? But I think FFF meant to ask how will the zealot engage in the conflict. For example, "only to lose control of his creation, setting the zealot on a race against time to rRead more
I like what FFF said although the ‘what happens’ question he asks is answered in that he devil is let loose on the world, right? But I think FFF meant to ask how will the zealot engage in the conflict. For example, “only to lose control of his creation, setting the zealot on a race against time to recapture the devil”, or something like that.
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