1. Posted: May 23, 2017In:

    Inspired by actual events, a Chicago man from a tough Chicago neighbor joins the Armed Forces, landing on D-Day +5, surviving the savagery of the Battle of Bastogne and guarding one of the Nazi’s Luftwaffe Commander, Herman Goering at Nuremburg.

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    What's the character's goal?

    What’s the character’s goal?

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  2. Posted: May 24, 2017In:

    A suspended detective confronts his long-buried past investigating an unsolved murder that forces him to face himself, to his end or a cathartic answer for the murder girl and himself.

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    He is suspended at the beginning after the opening scene, which shows us something about?his character. During his boredom of the suspension, he is reviewing the old case and realizes something he didn't think of before...and that's what pushes the story forward. ?These are my guesses about this oneRead more

    He is suspended at the beginning after the opening scene, which shows us something about?his character. During his boredom of the suspension, he is reviewing the old case and realizes something he didn’t think of before…and that’s what pushes the story forward. ?These are my guesses about this one.

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  3. Posted: May 23, 2017In:

    In the chaotic, deadly days after Pearl Harbor, the War Dept. seeks technically skilled and experienced divers to help with recovery of ships and personnel. Two Chief Divers are called forth, both with intimate knowledge of their ship and crew, the USS Arizona.

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    Still need a conflict...a goal...something. Given the previous thought that most of the people who would connect to the event naturally, what are you providing in this story to hook a new generation?

    Still need a conflict…a goal…something. Given the previous thought that most of the people who would connect to the event naturally, what are you providing in this story to hook a new generation?

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