1. Posted: May 22, 2017In:

    An aged USS Arizona survivor returns to Pearl Harbor one last time to reconcile his past and beg forgiveness for his two brothers who refused to stay at his apartment and died onboard the doomed ship at Pearl Harbor.

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    If his brothers refused, I don't understand the forgiveness part. Maybe his brothers wanted to stay at his place, and he turned them down for whatever reason...and they had to stay on the ship.

    If his brothers refused, I don’t understand the forgiveness part. Maybe his brothers wanted to stay at his place, and he turned them down for whatever reason…and they had to stay on the ship.

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  2. Posted: May 22, 2017In:

    Two ex-Navy divers fight both dread and fear as they are commissioned by the War Dept. to dive on the ship they served on, the USS Arizona.

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    I'm assuming this is in the past. The diver/s in the present day would be at an advanced age and probably wouldn't be diving. ?Is there a specific issue they are dealing with during the dive? Maybe they could be looking for something specific on the wreckage. What is it they dread and fear?

    I’m assuming this is in the past. The diver/s in the present day would be at an advanced age and probably wouldn’t be diving. ?Is there a specific issue they are dealing with during the dive? Maybe they could be looking for something specific on the wreckage. What is it they dread and fear?

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  3. Posted: May 22, 2017In:

    Bruce Ismay was ontop of the world until he took one single step off the doomed RMS Titanic and fought the rest of his life to save its memory and his legacy

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    I get it. But I think it needs a specific conflict with a time constraint.

    I get it. But I think it needs a specific conflict with a time constraint.

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