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As Nazi forces ready a counterattack after the first wave of the Warsaw Uprising, a scrappy Polish courier must cross the occupied city with three boy-scouts turned soldiers to recruit their battalion for a dangerous mission — liberate a concentration camp before the SS can kill its inmates.
I appreciate you looking this over! A (relatively) minor concentration camp was in fact liberated by a battalion of former boy scouts in the early days of the Warsaw Uprising. There aren't very many sources about the people who actually did it. The courier and the three soldiers are my inventions, bRead more
I appreciate you looking this over!
A (relatively) minor concentration camp was in fact liberated by a battalion of former boy scouts in the early days of the Warsaw Uprising. There aren’t very many sources about the people who actually did it. The courier and the three soldiers are my inventions, but they have historical analogues.
If I may, I am curious what difference it makes specifying which concentration camp they liberate. Could you elaborate on the importance of that for the purposes of a logline?
See lessAs Nazi forces ready a counterattack after the first wave of the Warsaw Uprising, a scrappy Polish courier must cross the occupied city with three boy-scouts turned soldiers to recruit their battalion for a dangerous mission — liberate a concentration camp before the SS can kill its inmates.
I appreciate you looking this over! A (relatively) minor concentration camp was in fact liberated by a battalion of former boy scouts in the early days of the Warsaw Uprising. There aren't very many sources about the people who actually did it. The courier and the three soldiers are my inventions, bRead more
I appreciate you looking this over!
A (relatively) minor concentration camp was in fact liberated by a battalion of former boy scouts in the early days of the Warsaw Uprising. There aren’t very many sources about the people who actually did it. The courier and the three soldiers are my inventions, but they have historical analogues.
If I may, I am curious what difference it makes specifying which concentration camp they liberate. Could you elaborate on the importance of that for the purposes of a logline?
See lessWhen a submissive guy, working for the mafia, is caught by the police he must help them to put the mafia behind bars to get the girl he really wants.
The whole mafia?! That's a pretty crazy goal! Maybe pull back on this a bit and just have him need to take down a specific person in the mob, presumably a big boss. Who's this girl he wants and why can't he have her? Perhaps she's an abused daughter of the mafia boss our hero has to bring down? YouRead more
The whole mafia?! That’s a pretty crazy goal! Maybe pull back on this a bit and just have him need to take down a specific person in the mob, presumably a big boss.
Who’s this girl he wants and why can’t he have her? Perhaps she’s an abused daughter of the mafia boss our hero has to bring down?
You may also want to reword it a bit. Maybe something like this:
“After a submissive mafioso is caught by the police, he must help them to put his boss behind bars to get the girl he really wants.”
As for the title, how about just “Flipped.”
Best of luck!
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