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When a submissive guy, working for the mafia, is caught by the police he must help them to put the mafia behind bars to get the girl he really wants.
The whole mafia?! That's a pretty crazy goal! Maybe pull back on this a bit and just have him need to take down a specific person in the mob, presumably a big boss. Who's this girl he wants and why can't he have her? Perhaps she's an abused daughter of the mafia boss our hero has to bring down? YouRead more
The whole mafia?! That’s a pretty crazy goal! Maybe pull back on this a bit and just have him need to take down a specific person in the mob, presumably a big boss.
Who’s this girl he wants and why can’t he have her? Perhaps she’s an abused daughter of the mafia boss our hero has to bring down?
You may also want to reword it a bit. Maybe something like this:
“After a submissive mafioso is caught by the police, he must help them to put his boss behind bars to get the girl he really wants.”
As for the title, how about just “Flipped.”
Best of luck!
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I'm just wondering what you mean by player. I think you mean that he's a womanizer, but as it stands it could also mean he's a professional athlete. I would find a more specific way of describing who this protagonist exactly is. Beyond that, I think the logline is just fine. Best of luck developingRead more
I’m just wondering what you mean by player. I think you mean that he’s a womanizer, but as it stands it could also mean he’s a professional athlete. I would find a more specific way of describing who this protagonist exactly is. Beyond that, I think the logline is just fine.
Best of luck developing it!
See lessA player afraid of commitments must save the girl he love when she gets kidnapped by one of his other girlfriends
I'm just wondering what you mean by player. I think you mean that he's a womanizer, but as it stands it could also mean he's a professional athlete. I would find a more specific way of describing who this protagonist exactly is. Beyond that, I think the logline is just fine. Best of luck developingRead more
I’m just wondering what you mean by player. I think you mean that he’s a womanizer, but as it stands it could also mean he’s a professional athlete. I would find a more specific way of describing who this protagonist exactly is. Beyond that, I think the logline is just fine.
Best of luck developing it!
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