1. Posted: June 12, 2015In:

    An inexperienced yet aspiring screenwriter, with an industry record of absolute failure in logline creation must defeat his greatest adversary, himself, and surpass with his last entry the infallible scrutiny of the top tier, professional reviewers of the "Logline.it!" website's as "A million dollars for The Perfect Logline Contest" deadline draws to a close in one minute.

    Darion

    Thank you Hullaballo. Most appreciated. I'm trying to get the hang of this. Loglines are more difficult than I had anticipating. Hopefully, I'll perfect one soon. Absolutely grateful for your broad grin. Smile back at ya!

    Thank you Hullaballo. Most appreciated. I’m trying to get the hang of this. Loglines are more difficult than I had anticipating. Hopefully, I’ll perfect one soon. Absolutely grateful for your broad grin. Smile back at ya!

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2015In:

    A troubled teen is mysteriously abducted and transported to a secluded training facility, where he and a band of juvenile misfits encounter an otherworldly enemy in a struggle for survival.

    Darion

    Try to make the logline as succinct as possible. Eliminate the the word "transported", since an abduction already gives us that he was "taken". Obvious somewhere. For the lead, how about adding a personal trait that makes him stand out, let's suppose, juvenile tactician. A key detail since he's gonnRead more

    Try to make the logline as succinct as possible. Eliminate the the word “transported”, since an abduction already gives us that he was “taken”. Obvious somewhere. For the lead, how about adding a personal trait that makes him stand out, let’s suppose, juvenile tactician. A key detail since he’s gonna go head to head with a superior out-world intellect.

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  3. Posted: June 12, 2015In:

    A mentorship between a pragmatic and manipulative businessman and an underprivileged high school genius evolves into a battle of wits as both try to prove their intellectual superiority over the other.

    Darion

    In agreement with Nir Shelter. I'm no expert, but while being here I'm picking up knowledge and from my perspective, what's the goal for their intellectual chess match? What is the fate of them meeting and engaging in that battle of wits? Add the irony and take it to the next level. Hope this also hRead more

    In agreement with Nir Shelter. I’m no expert, but while being here I’m picking up knowledge and from my perspective, what’s the goal for their intellectual chess match? What is the fate of them meeting and engaging in that battle of wits? Add the irony and take it to the next level. Hope this also helps.

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