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A good father and respected police officer is prisoned after he accidentally shot a young child, who was in the driving away robber?s car. He is trying to get his life back with a support of citizens of his city.
It may be different with such a young child, but since 9/11 and the militarization of America's police force(they are often given old military equipment, and are given money in order to buy equipment to fight terrorists), the amount of police shootings in America is extremely high(in other countriesRead more
It may be different with such a young child, but since 9/11 and the militarization of America’s police force(they are often given old military equipment, and are given money in order to buy equipment to fight terrorists), the amount of police shootings in America is extremely high(in other countries such as Australia and the U.K, the police often kill less than ten people a year, while America killed hundreds each year), and the accountability of the police is low. Police who kill citizens hardly ever go to trial, usually only when there’s evidence of the officer lying or a cover-up. And in many of those cases, the police officers who killed the victims were in a different situation than shooting at moving car, because they were either standing right in front of the person they shot, ?putting them in a choke hold, even beating them.
See lessAnyway, my point is, in real life there’s a pretty good chance this officer wouldn’t go to trial, or at least not convicted. Like the case where an officer shot a child with a toy gun and not was indicted. (Tamir Rice shooting)
A terrifying dream, twisted by a crafty Vizier, drives an ageing king to dispose his new-born grandson heir in the wild mountains. 18 Years later the aged king discovers the Royal Games Gladiator Winners pedigree
Review the Training tab if you haven't already. This doesn't describe the plot. This whole post is backstory, and then the ending is the inciting incident. I suggest cutting most of the first part, then using the discovery as the inciting incident, and after that, what becomes the protagonist's goalRead more
Review the Training tab if you haven’t already.
See lessThis doesn’t describe the plot. This whole post is backstory, and then the ending is the inciting incident.
I suggest cutting most of the first part, then using the discovery as the inciting incident, and after that, what becomes the protagonist’s goal? What action do they take to achieve it?
The story follows group of friends,each with different idealism and with love for wrong person,as they begin suspecting some of them actually killed their friend who died in an accident.
"The story follows group of friends,each with different idealism and with love for wrong person,as they begin suspecting some of them actually killed their friend who died in an accident." What is the actual plot? Suspecting is not a plot. Investigating is. The inciting incident of your story shouldRead more
“The story follows group of friends,each with different idealism and with love for wrong person,as they begin suspecting some of them actually killed their friend who died in an accident.”
What is the actual plot? Suspecting is not a plot. Investigating is.
The inciting incident of your story should be in front, not last.
Review the Training tab if you haven’t already.
Example:?When their friend dies in an accident, three diverse teenagers must figure out which one of them caused it.?(~20 words)
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