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Formerly a gang member, when a gunfight paralyzes an aspiring cook’s hands, she resorts to preparing scalding-hot entrees with her feet to accomplish her dream of becoming a gourmet chef.
"Formerly a gang member, when a gunfight paralyzes an aspiring cook?s hands, she resorts to preparing scalding-hot entrees with her feet to accomplish her dream of becoming a gourmet chef." When? a former gang member is paralyzed in a gunfight, she must resort to using her feet to prepare food in orRead more
“Formerly a gang member, when a gunfight paralyzes an aspiring cook?s hands, she resorts to preparing scalding-hot entrees with her feet to accomplish her dream of becoming a gourmet chef.”
When? a former gang member is paralyzed in a gunfight, she must resort to using her feet to prepare food in order to achieve her dream of becoming a gourmet chef.?(~31 words)
So she’s paralyzed from the waist up? Besides that, who would want to eat food someone prepared with their feet? Nowadays, most people would never think of drinking wine that is made by mashing grapes with feet; even though people used to.
See lessA struggling college student, plagued by his current state of being, discovers a device called the “God Helmet” and becomes the test subject for his Professor’s experiment.
What is the God Helmet? What does main character do after the discovery? Review the Training tab at the top of the page to get an idea of standard logline structure. But in a nutshell: Inciting incident Goal of protagonist Method the protagonist uses to achieve that goal.
What is the God Helmet? What does main character do after the discovery?
Review the Training tab at the top of the page to get an idea of standard logline structure.
But in a nutshell:
See lessInciting incident
Goal of protagonist
Method the protagonist uses to achieve that goal.
?In order to help create an international antiterrorism taskforce, the D. o. D. Director of Psychological Operations Dr. Samantha Ryan struggles to overcome her ex husband and the terrorists with whom he is associated.?
Presario, as noted before it doesn't seem like your protagonist drives the plot of the story. In fact it seems she hardly in the story at all since you focus on the ex-husband. So, I either suggest changing the main character, or or making sure it the woman who drives the plot. In other words, whenRead more
Presario, as noted before it doesn’t seem like your protagonist drives the plot of the story. In fact it seems she hardly in the story at all since you focus on the ex-husband. So, I either suggest changing the main character, or or making sure it the woman who drives the plot.
See lessIn other words, when the ex husband attacks the woman, she is the one to hunt him down, she is the one who arrests/kills him at the end. Or is killed by him. She is the one who retakes control of her life that her husband once tried to take from her.