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  1. Posted: January 19, 2017In: Romance

    When an agoraphobic online student meets his soulmate, he gets a job at a bar to face his fear in public, only to find out that his love is a pop star.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 20, 2017 at 11:11 am

    "If you look back through the lineage of MCs with mental conditions, they are all ?full-on? problems." First, I don't disagree with you, Nir Shelter, however I do want to offer a different point. In real life people have varying situations of their mental illness. I think not taking it to the extremRead more

    “If you look back through the lineage of MCs with mental conditions, they are all ?full-on? problems.”

    First, I don’t disagree with you, Nir Shelter, however I do want to offer a different point. In real life people have varying situations of their mental illness. I think not taking it to the extreme might be able to offer a realistic take on mental illness, that it’s not just ‘crazy’ people.
    However, perhaps for the way this story is framed I might have to agree with you. The extreme version would cause more drama and tension. But nonetheless, I would like to see a nuanced, non-stereotypical version of mental illness displayed on screen.
    (on a similar note I think FX’s Legion looks to be a great addition into the X-Men universe, which deals with mental illness)

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  2. Posted: January 13, 2017In: Public

    Any screenwriters out there want to help me

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 17, 2017 at 2:46 am

    Something else to do is to take an idea and strip it down, make it as simple as possible. To take from your ideas, stolen memory. No conspiracies. Just make a prompt with that, and think of it as the starting point of a universe you can build on later. So set the scene: The main character wakes up,Read more

    Something else to do is to take an idea and strip it down, make it as simple as possible. To take from your ideas, stolen memory. No conspiracies. Just make a prompt with that, and think of it as the starting point of a universe you can build on later.
    So set the scene: The main character wakes up, and they realize a memory has been stolen.
    Now from there, think of the ending. How does the story build up to that point. Form a logline for the antagonist, the protagonist, and major supporting characters. They should each play a big role in the story.

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  3. Posted: January 13, 2017In: Public

    Any screenwriters out there want to help me

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 16, 2017 at 2:23 am

    I have a similar condition because I can easily think of big ideas, concepts for a story, but developing the story, those details get to me. Try finding a specific outline online. One that goes through every beat, a cookie-cutter three-act inciting incident at 15 minute mark outline. Then fill it inRead more

    I have a similar condition because I can easily think of big ideas, concepts for a story, but developing the story, those details get to me.
    Try finding a specific outline online. One that goes through every beat, a cookie-cutter three-act inciting incident at 15 minute mark outline. Then fill it in and write a rough draft, no editing, just whatever comes out. Then after a rough draft cut stuff and edit.
    Something else I do is make a plot sheet, detailing every main and subplot. And then I break it down into three parts and how the plots progress. And every morning I write a summary?of what I’m going to write later that day.

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